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Good things about it:

-a fairly interesting cast
-pretty unpredictable
-Jeremy<3 Baylor<3 Jaclyn<3 are a great top 3 for me

Things I don't like:

The main one is how...sporadic everything is. Like, the screentime is balanced, but there's no real story arcs going on or anything. It's just "look at this happen" and "now look at this" nothing really connects, you know? I don't get Keith's edit at all, I don't get why they made Josh CP5 and Reed INV1, etc.

So overall, I'm pretty :bulletyellow: on it right now.  
Sfc13 Edgic by Slicer37
Sfc13 Edgic
Great season, really enjoyed it! Rankings will be up soon.

:bulletpurple: SFC3
:bulletblue: SFC2
:bulletgreen: SFC13
:bulletgreen: SFC7
:bulletgreen: SFC11
:bulletorange: SFC6
:bulletred: SFC10
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what did I just watch...

random nonsensical shit like this<3
SFC11 REDO by Slicer37
SFC11 REDO

yeah this is why I didn't do sfc11 rankings yet lol. I'll update this episode per episode!

EPISODE 1

Hantz tribe:

the hantz tribe arrives at camp, with Eli and honey complaining about them being named after russell hantz the whole way. When they get there, Crisco is tired of idle chitchat and starts giving people orders
Sexygirl challenges him right away, and says she's not going to let some old fart boss her around

 crisco tries to deflect the situation by playing nice, but bradlyn eggs sexy on
and the two quickly get to squabbling
Tialayla breaks them apart, though, and says she learned in cheerleading that two bickering chiefs will ruin the whole squad
Eli is enthastic about TWO!!! goddesses on the tribe, and Crisco and Sexygirl reluctantly follow T's lead

 hantz quickly split into alliance groups
honey and eli bond over their survivor love
while bradlyn and rosemary bond over rosemary's tragic past and bradlyn's "tragic" past
 Despite Tialayla's attempts to control the two, Sexy and Crisco both try to campaign against the others
However, people aren't interested and neither of them are getting any luck
until Crisco spots Moe'Mi by herself trying new gimmicks, and smirks to himself that he's found his follower

 MARIANO
The 9 contestants quickly get working on camp...except for Dwayne, who just sleeps while everyone works around him
Juiced quickly grabs up Claus/Whitney/Artemis, and brags about how he's going to make an alliance with a strong "bro" and two hot chicks
when Whitney points out that they can't "rule" the tribe liked Juiced wants to with 4 people, he arrgoantly states that he's so awesome that the others will beg to be in this alliance, and they should consider themselves lucky
Claus and Artemis exchange doubtful looks, and go off on their own
each of them are mad that Juiced Up tried to make them followers, since no one makes a follower out of the smartest player in the game, and artemis moonshine
They agree to a pact, only to bitch about each other the minute they walk off
Dwayne is still sleeping, now along with Casey, while Sunflower is trying to plant flowers because "people look stressed"
Walking by, Angel makes plenty of comments about how stupid those three are, and while Sunflower bursts into tears, Casey tries to rip into her, but fails miserably
Flay is panicked about being weaker than he looks, and that the tribe will eliminate him quickly for it
he resolves to isolate himself and find the idol, and much to his happiness, he finds the challenge advantage idol
 
 CHALLENGE
flay considers playing the idol already, but decides against it
and mariano doesn't need it, as Juiced easily overpowers Paine on the first part of the course, and Hantz can't recover from that
Mariano wins immunity!

 Back at camp, Paine apolgizes for his losing to Juiced Up, only to T to tell him he has no chance of leaving tonight
much to her fustration, Crisco and Sexygirl are firmly targeting each other while weaker members slide on by
Sexygirl tries to flirt with all the men and bribe all the women with tengaged prizes
it works on Eli, but not because of the flirting, because he wants to ally with an OTTN goddess
honey reluctantly agrees...
but everyone else turns against Sexygirl for her behavior, and she's voted off first 6-3'

(sorry for the awkward formatting I c/p'd it from Skype)

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5. *character writer likes* and *other character writer likes* are going to get together, but *character author doesn't like* might get in the way! What will happen???? (spoiler: characters author likes get together in the end).

4. TD new season redo, where coincidentally, all the characters the author likes get far, along with one character they don't like to be the villain and get humiliated. Oh, and the author's OTP get together, also coincidentally!

3.  Total drama characters...except in high school, where somehow they all go to the same one! how creative and clever!!!! (it isn't).

2. New season where people get to submit OC's! Guaranteed not to last more than 4 chapters! 

and number one...

1. SUMMARY SUCKS, BUT STORY IS GOOD!!!!!!! REVIEW PLZ!!!!!!

...yeah I'm feeling sarcastic today.
Good things about it:

-a fairly interesting cast
-pretty unpredictable
-Jeremy<3 Baylor<3 Jaclyn<3 are a great top 3 for me

Things I don't like:

The main one is how...sporadic everything is. Like, the screentime is balanced, but there's no real story arcs going on or anything. It's just "look at this happen" and "now look at this" nothing really connects, you know? I don't get Keith's edit at all, I don't get why they made Josh CP5 and Reed INV1, etc.

So overall, I'm pretty :bulletyellow: on it right now.  

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Dragonettes Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2014
Thank you for watching me~! ^_^
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BeekerMaroo777 Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2014  Student General Artist
Hi there! I have a Total Drama theory & I'm curious if you wanna hear it.
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Slicer37 Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2014
 go ahead...
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BeekerMaroo777 Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2014  Student General Artist
Okay. ^-^ I made a journal for it: beekermaroo777.deviantart.com/…
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SoulfulGinger17 Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2014
OK, here's the feedback you wanted:
- Cast is interesting.

- I'd bleep out the F-Bombs, and keep the swearing to a minimum in general.

- Pacing needs some work, but is overall good.

Aside from that, good start, and I hope to see more. :)
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Slicer37 Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2014
lol i kind of like having the swearing in because i like the tone it gives but if people are bothered by it i'll bleep it out

thanks dude :)
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xebla Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2014
Thank for the watch! :)
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Vilecheese2 Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2014
After reading some of the stuff Belle said I kinda appreciate her more.
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Slicer37 Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2014
lol ty!

chat.deviantart.com/chat/lasel… if you want to chat?
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DarkShockBro Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2014  Student Writer
First chapter of Total Drama Isle is up! Have a look, if you are so inclined: darkshockbro.deviantart.com/ar…
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DarkShockBro Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2014  Student Writer
Second chapter of Total Drama Isle is up! Have a look, if you are so inclined: darkshockbro.deviantart.com/ar…
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BeekerMaroo777 Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2014  Student General Artist
I see you like Total Drama, so please view this: beekermaroo777.deviantart.com/…
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Shadow326 Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2014   Digital Artist
Hey, you're that dude that likes villains, right? Well, I'm planning on written my own season of Total Drama. The majority of the cast is villains and neutral characters. And trust me, the bad guys won't get the short end of the stick in this season.

shadow326.deviantart.com/art/T…
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Smuupay Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
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xXMARzipanESXx Featured By Owner May 5, 2014  Student Digital Artist
penguins <333
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SSBFreak Featured By Owner May 4, 2014
Congrats on making it to near-end in Endurance!
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Slicer37 Featured By Owner May 4, 2014
thank you<3

sorry about you going early :(
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Lasercatz Featured By Owner May 4, 2014
I love your new avatar <3
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Slicer37 Featured By Owner May 4, 2014
squawk! squawk!
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